E-Mail for Song Permission

Here is a print screen of the message we sent to Jack Johnson' licensing contact via his website. It is a message/letter to ask permission to use his song.

The message said:

'To whoever it may concern,
We are writing to ask for your permission to use the song ‘Pictures of people taking pictures’, by Jack Johnson, for our A2 media coursework. Our task is to produce a music video for a song, and we thought of an interesting concept for this song so this was song was our final decision. Moreover, we would very much like to use this song.
Yours sincerely,
Georgina, Ellie and John.'